My favorite place
The best place that I take out all of my worries is the winter forest where is located in Netherlands. I will go there once or twice a year. Especially in the winter, it is more beautiful than any other season.
When I went to the winter forest, I would love to be alone and walked in the snow through the forest to get more inspiration and forget all of my worries. While I was walking, I saw a bird flying through the snowflake and it was falling down to the ground. I also saw a small toy boat stuck on the frozen river. I smelt fresh falling snow in the forest that made me feel breezy. Moreover, I heard the wind blowing though the dead tree in the winter forest. Because of its silent, it made me feel calm and thoughtful. I touched frozen snow on the ground that made me feel really cold, all of my body was going to be freeze. And when I went out of the forest, I saw beautiful sun set with red and yellow color before it was going to be dark. I still miss the feeling when I was at the winter forest in Netherlands, and hope that I will have a chance to go there soon again in someday.
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