Having a happy time with dancing competition.
It was a happy time that I joined the dancing competition when I was in Taiwan.
First, I want to tell you that I got the scholarship to go to Taiwan with 3 students who were chosen by the judges and passed the test the same as me.
So,it has a happy time that I couldn't forget. On August 21, 2017, about 4.30 pm. I had a dancing competition. It was a great time that I spent with my team. The competition was started from group A to group G and I was in group E, so before the dancing competition started, I practiced with my team for 20-30 minutes and then the time to show was going to start.We prepared to dance and set the position. When the time came,we started to dance, and I was sure that it was an amazing performance;we did it really well. And because of my team was only a team that practice the performance, so it made our dance better than other groups. We were really happy and enjoy when we dance. However, each groups did it really well. A few moment later, after the performance,it was the time to announce the winner of this competition and the winner was my team.We were very surprised and happy that we won this competition because we practiced really hard. We got 3,000 $, so we decided to use it for our friends. We bought bubble tea for everyone. We drank it together and spent time to talk with others. I remembered that it was a really happy time of my life and I couldn't forget. It didn't matter that who would win this competition and important things were we spent time together to share our happiness and made it our best memories.
First, I want to tell you that I got the scholarship to go to Taiwan with 3 students who were chosen by the judges and passed the test the same as me.
So,it has a happy time that I couldn't forget. On August 21, 2017, about 4.30 pm. I had a dancing competition. It was a great time that I spent with my team. The competition was started from group A to group G and I was in group E, so before the dancing competition started, I practiced with my team for 20-30 minutes and then the time to show was going to start.We prepared to dance and set the position. When the time came,we started to dance, and I was sure that it was an amazing performance;we did it really well. And because of my team was only a team that practice the performance, so it made our dance better than other groups. We were really happy and enjoy when we dance. However, each groups did it really well. A few moment later, after the performance,it was the time to announce the winner of this competition and the winner was my team.We were very surprised and happy that we won this competition because we practiced really hard. We got 3,000 $, so we decided to use it for our friends. We bought bubble tea for everyone. We drank it together and spent time to talk with others. I remembered that it was a really happy time of my life and I couldn't forget. It didn't matter that who would win this competition and important things were we spent time together to share our happiness and made it our best memories.
I think this is a great experience of your life. May be perfect because I do not see wrong point. I will give you 9.5/10
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